Ryan Cc Poet Shape

Procrastination

P 
   E 
      N 
         D 
            U 
               L  
                  U
	     M
	        S
                      Pause 
           To protest, paradigms of         
       Patterned positions, pathways           
   Pegged precise. Postpone the push 
 And pull of passion prostrate, to push
 And pull in planned pulses...  in preset  
Partial pirouettes,purloin the progress of         
 Premeditated peace. Pressing, pacing,   
    Perspiring,to purchase a panacea         
         Of prisoners… The present           
                   Passes-Past.
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Beata Agustin December 13, 2024 at 12:00 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A March 21, 2016 at 10:00 PM Ryan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A January 15, 2016 at 8:34 PM Ryan, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **

Debbie Guzzi November 20, 2009 at 1:59 PM another wonder! Light & Love pump kin ;)

Carol Sunshine Brown January 5, 2009 at 5:11 AM Congratulations on being a finalist and having your poetry featured Ryan. Love Carol

Carrie Richards January 4, 2009 at 4:40 PM Excellent poem, and perfect form...well deserved to be among the winning finals! Congratulations!!~ Carrie

Michael Jordan January 4, 2009 at 9:52 AM Ryan - Seems to me like a double congratulations is in order – A Finalist and a featured poem – Great Job – God Bless, MJ

Sharon Winter January 4, 2009 at 6:45 AM Congratulations on being a featured finalist this week! Love, Shar

John Heck November 30, 2008 at 4:21 AM Ryan = Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Sharon Winter November 11, 2008 at 9:15 AM Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan November 1, 2008 at 4:36 PM Paul - Outstanding - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

Carol Sunshine Brown October 28, 2008 at 7:23 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

P Sheart October 27, 2008 at 3:45 PM Hi Ryan Paul Very clever and witty. Congrats on your wonderful poetic write making the semi-finals and best of luck in the finals!! Love Light Truth Patricia

Michelle Mac Donald July 25, 2008 at 8:53 AM This is a very creative piece, Ryan Paul .:) I love how you employed the letter 'P' to project the imagery. Great beginning and clever end. I believe that I'm one of these 'procrastinators'. :( Not so much fun. Often I will overcome this with spontaneity. This doesn't always work either. :) I'm procrastinating at the moment, I'd better go and get some stuff finished up...sighhh Best to you...God bless you and yours...Mikki .:)

Cayetano Young July 17, 2008 at 6:20 PM Cleverly written Sir. i'm looking forward to see this in winners list in the next poetry soup contest. hope you can comment more in my poetry. with much respect and adoration, GiNoLoCo,18,Philippines (*note: asL?) (*chuckles)

Michael Jordan July 14, 2008 at 8:18 AM Very ingenious poem - great job