Problem With Me

problem with me

I rush to mend
that is my plight.
an over whelming need 
to make things right.

for fallen sparrow 
from its nest
or heart that seems 
to find no rest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 8:37 AM
You are a nurse by trade no? :) a beautiful pen my friend. xomo
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August 21, 2017 at 1:39 PM
It's a calling :) a few in my family, a client of mine is, a wound specialist, she loves her work; my partner's mum a nurse was too, headed the nurses' union. I must thank you for the work you have done and congratulate you on retirement :)
Cresswell Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 12:45 PM
Yeppers retired now. I don't think a problem but family and friends do. Thanks for reading.
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