David Crandall Poet Rhyme

Problem Solved

I'm teasing my favorite commenter (you know who you are) - lol!

My friends told me I'm not quite right. 
So, I saw a doctor for some insight. 
The doctor, at first, could only doubt it,
"I don't know how you live without it. 
Medical science must be redrawn -
your personality is gone."

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CayCay Godwin May 30, 2025 at 7:19 AM Oh my oh me, this is wonderful. I love that you did this and can't tell you how much the intro means to me. All and all, I'm thoroughly emotionally and humor touched. Oh, you ... CayCay David Crandall May 30, 2025 at 9:12 PM Haha, glad you fell into my snare. BTW, I just corrected a typo (from medicine science to medical science). OK, let's try for a metaphor: poem=pig, correction=lipstick. CayCay Godwin May 30, 2025 at 4:50 PM Entrapment! You drew me out. Such fun this is, thanks for stirring it up ... CayCay David Crandall May 30, 2025 at 7:58 AM Haha, you (the masked commenter) have revealed yourself, thanks CayCay! :-)