Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Haiku

Probabilities

Probabilities

Longing for your love,
Probably I might be blessed,
If not one sided !

Sitting in a group,
Yet loneliness grips my mind,
Probably elsewhere !


You hear my heartbeats,
Reciprocate hugging heats,
Probably dreaming !



Written on 21/7/14
Contest - haiku on probabilities
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Scott Thirtyseven August 11, 2014 at 9:30 AM Probably may things, but a winner definitely, congrats. Great write.

Sam Raj August 9, 2014 at 11:21 AM Hi Dr. Upmaji, Congrats on this big win. A wonderful poem of probabilities. Thanks for sharing. TC :-)

Pandita Sietesantos August 9, 2014 at 9:26 AM Congratulations dear Dr. Upma, on your great win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful haiku. Great write! Pandita

Dr Anuradha Moogi August 8, 2014 at 10:22 PM Really romantic!!!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta August 8, 2014 at 9:48 PM Lovely romantic expressions, Dr. Upma. congrats on the win

Casarah Nance August 8, 2014 at 9:01 PM Wonderful winning Haiku's my friend :) Hugs :)

D.W. Rodgers August 8, 2014 at 7:39 PM Well done, touching many sides. Congrats on your win.

Richard Lamoureux August 8, 2014 at 7:35 PM One of my favorites, congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2014 at 6:56 PM Nice ones, Dr. Upma. Congrats for your win.

Abdul Malik Mandani August 8, 2014 at 6:38 PM Hey good job! "Probably dreaming!"

Jan Allison August 8, 2014 at 6:29 PM three excellent haiku i especially like the second one - great win! Hugs Jan xxx

Paul Callus August 8, 2014 at 2:14 PM Well done, Upma! I had no doubt about the final result. Big congratulations. // paul

Verlena S. Walker July 23, 2014 at 1:26 AM Awesome write Upma... GL in the contest... Hugs Verlena

Andrea Dietrich July 21, 2014 at 5:06 PM a trio of interesting poems on probabilities. good luck in the contest! Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 22, 2014 at 4:53 AM Thnx Andrea my dear friend!

Paul Callus July 21, 2014 at 4:50 PM Probably these haiku are among the best I've read so far. All three final lines are excellent. gl in contest, Upma! // paul Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 22, 2014 at 4:55 AM Glad to have ur very kind encouraging comments as ever Paul ! Thnx a lot !