Prized Possession

Prized Possession


When was it that society and religion
Became so afraid of the sexuality of women

Or was it just men who became afraid

Trapping and turning beauty into ***********
To suit the idealism of a capitalistic
Ideology
Made women its prized possession

There was once spiritual prowess in her nakedness
Once long ago
The symbol of womb and breast
Gave birth to life

And a possession was once the sexual expression
Of both women and men
Connecting
Copulating
In an essence of a spiritual unity
Defined by the pleasure both received
In giving to life

So how did sex become a sin
Dirtied by morals
And then sold in a tin 
Of instant readily affordable self gratification
When did your own sexuality
Become a commodity
For them to sale

And poor Eve, lead mankind to ruin
And she alone made responsible for the fall from Eden
So shall she pay the price in cultural centuries
Of Christian and Muslim oppression

Such is the weakness of men
That by muscle alone defends them
Such is the weakness of men
That their God must of course; be a man
Such is the weakness of men
That in the face of beauty
It must be their possession

Such is my contempt of those men
Who cannot comprehend
Where their own lives began
And who’s wives and daughter now exists
In a poor excuse for love and worship
Trapping and turning beauty into ***********
To suit the idealism of a capitalistic
Ideology
Made women its prized possession




Inspired by Brandy Megens poem “News at 5”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/3/2009 11:32:00 AM
COLIN YOU AMAZE ME IN EVERY WAY I AM HONORED THAT YOU WROTE THIS ON SUCH A TABOO SUBJECT THIS IS WHY YOU AMAZE ME MY FRIEND
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Date: 7/1/2009 10:41:00 PM
I read brandy's poem=)You will Have a smile on her face
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Date: 7/1/2009 5:08:00 PM
Oh what a great debate could be had here. Smashing topic, Ive always felt Eve got a bad rap, one single impetuous act brought down perfection. Frankly I was always glad it wasn't me. When did the paintings of the masters become something to blush at. Some of the writings of the 16th century practically did me in during classes. Geez this could've been so fun.
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Date: 7/1/2009 1:32:00 PM
I dunno Catie, but I don't see any sexual expression in this poem, but rather sexual oppression...... but if it were a poem about passion and desire and sexual expression then the mystery would be defined by how well you knew the person; personally I am a play with a bonfire person rather than a mess with candles type..and I think if you got something to say, then say it.... A Nature can be the most wildly and wickedly attractive thing
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