Privilege

Privilege
When the privilege first was given
When it was still crisp and new
When it had all others craving
For which is granted a small few
Then you reveled in its status
’Cause it gave you eminence
Yes, you teased with your position
And you reeked of confidence
You would make sure that they noticed
You would make sure that they knew
And you even made it public
You were from a certain crew
All of this was soon accepted
Everybody understood
You were better than all others
You alone could set the mood
So the others came together
And someone brought this to the fore
And they all took a decision
From now on they would ignore
You, your pride, and all your antics
For it didn’t make no sense
They would not allow much longer
For you to shine at their expense
For your shining was too costly
And it really took its toll
It caused anger and confusion
You respected no one’s role
So while you still enjoy your privilege
It is now just seen as work
For you gave the wrong impression
By behaving like a jerk.

Wendy Nipas

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/29/2018 12:09:00 AM
This seems even more poignant after just having watched American History X. Great rhyming and message.
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Wendy Nipas
Date: 10/29/2018 6:57:00 AM
You don't say, lol. Thanks Richard.
Date: 7/28/2018 5:20:00 AM
Cool soul poetry is so refreshing to read, Wendy! The truth message ... the wit delivery ... the humble resolution. This sparkling poem has the whole package. I adore this elegantly expressed poem. This my maiden voyage into your poetic ocean of thoughts. Can't wait to go on a second cruise. May love light your path in life always. Romantic Warrior
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Wendy Nipas
Date: 7/28/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thank you so much! I'm blushing right now. Your compliments all together read like a poem in itself. All I can say is Enjoy the voyage!
Date: 7/26/2018 5:27:00 AM
Wendy.. when you decide to slam... wow!!
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Wendy Nipas
Date: 7/26/2018 6:10:00 AM
Haha, I'm not slamming, I promise (lol) . Thank you.
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