Sara Kendrick Poet Triolet

Privet Hedge

Down where the Privet Hedge blossoms
And the burgundy running rose
We're not living in high cotton

Down where the Privet Hedge blossoms
There are many wild O'Possums
Secrets hidden in closets undisclosed

Down where the Privet Hedge Blossoms
And the burgundy running rose  

Friday, May 09, 2014
Sponsor: Charolette Puddifoot
Contest: Irritate Me

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Richard Lamoureux May 17, 2014 at 8:34 AM Nicely done Sarah, congrats.

Joyce Johnson May 16, 2014 at 11:07 PM Congratulations on your win, Sara. I find you in he winners circle regularly. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta May 16, 2014 at 8:51 PM Lovely take on the theme and congrats on the win, sara

Charlotte Puddifoot May 16, 2014 at 7:10 PM this one 'grew' on me the more I read it (a bit like a rose!) and there is a hint of intrigue and mystery within the lines, indeed something slightly unsettling...I always like a poem that makes me think and leaves me with questions - congrats on your win in my contest :)

Jack Horne May 11, 2014 at 6:19 PM I can picture this, Sara - a big winner, I'd say

Joe Maverick May 10, 2014 at 11:21 PM Really good description of the indifference of 'life' along side its recognition Sara, love the richness of the Burgundy roses, well i assume there are more than one.?? take care..'

Deborah Shiells May 10, 2014 at 9:39 PM Hi Sara, I loved loved this write. it was just perfectly written, like a story book. Love your poems Sara,.They speak directly to the heart:-) Thank you so so much for being a wonderful poet and sharing your writes with us. Peace, Deborah

Joseph May May 10, 2014 at 9:38 PM Wonderful write Sara....best wishes

Andrea Dietrich May 9, 2014 at 5:03 PM what a cool poem, Sara. Like how you stuck that possum in there!!! and the burgundy rose running through it.