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Privet Hedge

Down where the Privet Hedge blossoms And the burgundy running rose We're not living in high cotton Down where the Privet Hedge blossoms There are many wild O'Possums Secrets hidden in closets undisclosed Down where the Privet Hedge Blossoms And the burgundy running rose Friday, May 09, 2014 Sponsor: Charolette Puddifoot Contest: Irritate Me

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/17/2014 8:34:00 AM

Nicely done Sarah, congrats.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/16/2014 11:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Sara. I find you in he winners circle regularly. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2014 8:51:00 PM

Lovely take on the theme and congrats on the win, sara

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/16/2014 7:10:00 PM

this one 'grew' on me the more I read it (a bit like a rose!) and there is a hint of intrigue and mystery within the lines, indeed something slightly unsettling...I always like a poem that makes me think and leaves me with questions - congrats on your win in my contest :)

Jack Horne

Date: 5/11/2014 6:19:00 PM

I can picture this, Sara - a big winner, I'd say

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/10/2014 11:21:00 PM

Really good description of the indifference of 'life' along side its recognition Sara, love the richness of the Burgundy roses, well i assume there are more than one.?? take care..'

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/10/2014 9:39:00 PM

Hi Sara, I loved loved this write. it was just perfectly written, like a story book. Love your poems Sara,.They speak directly to the heart:-) Thank you so so much for being a wonderful poet and sharing your writes with us. Peace, Deborah

Joseph May

Date: 5/10/2014 9:38:00 PM

Wonderful write Sara....best wishes

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2014 5:03:00 PM

what a cool poem, Sara. Like how you stuck that possum in there!!! and the burgundy rose running through it.