Pristine Shoreline

Along the barren pristine shore
Layered with fine grains of sand
A place remains untouched by man
Waves lap in soothing rhythmic motion
Brushing and polishing the surface
Soft and shimmering jewels glisten
 The lemon yellow rays shine
heating and cooling the surface
Time, weather and wind reshape
this beautiful landscape.

11/07/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Duncan Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 7:40 PM
Lovely poem :)
Horne Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 2:31 PM
just beautiful
Babcock Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 11:25 AM
Thanks Jack I see I have missed a few so thanks. love phyl
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 9:07 PM
Oh, I love this, Phyllis and it reminds me of my quintain I just wrote for Mother Earth as a shoreline!! we were on the same "wave" length.
Babcock Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Thanks Andrea. love phyl
Allison Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 3:05 PM
absolutely beautiful imagery Phyllis:-) hugs Jan xx
Babcock Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Thanks Jan did not realize i missed thanking on this one. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 12:22 PM
- Sounds like a heavenly place, Phyllis - Beautifully written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Missed thanking all on this past poem. love phyl
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