Pristine Nature Imaged

The cascading stream leaps down the emerald valley
Dancing waters caress rolling pebbles on their facet 
Twilight weaves light and shade lattice on tree canopy
Drizzle of silent night sprinkles stardust on the thicket
Stars of firefly twinkle to the tune of crooning cricket.


January 1, 2020
Contest : Writing Prompt-English Quintain Imagery
Sponsor : Dear Heart
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La France Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 8:36 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my writing prompt challenge with this lovely poem of nature, well done _Constance
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January 14, 2020 at 2:18 PM
- A great winning poem, congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 4:52 AM
Congratulations on your second place win my friend! xxoo
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 5:19 PM
Subimal, your imagery is so exquisite that I visualized being there in physical form drinking in the beauty with my senses. This lovely poem is a Fave for me. I hope to see this a top winner in the contest. Blessings for a wonderful New Year! xxoo
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 11:09 AM
Great imagery here, all my best on the contest my friend~@wk
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