Prisoner of Poetry

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Ink's Prisoner of Poetry Contest *** March 23, 2025

Metaphors and similes flow freely from my pen 
when I am scripting and scribing in poetic verse.
Across the width of pale parchment pages 
the nib of my feathered pen continues to traverse.
Ink courses fathoms deep within me like life blood, 
rushing through the eddied channels of my veins.
I struggle to ignore the cramping in my fingers.
There's no hesitation when writing echoing refrains
when I imprison myself in poetry.

Each stanza I carefully arrange in proper sequence 
as if it's a bairn born for the creation of my story.
Sometimes my gypsy muse joins me in the dance
when I write with abandonment in wild allegory.
I never try to rein her in when we're both focused
and driven to complete a poem, oblivious of time.
With vivid imagination, romantic sonnets are birthed
as I sit penning line after line in consummate rhyme,
incarcerated at my desk until I've written the last line.

My thoughts tumble like flurries of pristine snowflakes.
With a single spark of romance my passion ignites
as each completed verse falls perfectly into place, it lifts
my need to write compositions of love to greater heights.
Day and night, I find myself a wanderer, lost in reveries
where I journey in a private kingdom of verbose amplitude.
Around each curve in the road is a new challenge to be met,
and yet, none thwart me when trysting in romantic interlude.
Rude would be the one who would disturb me 
when I'm handcuffed to a work in progress.

I try to indite with some semblance, dare I call it skill or talent?
By no means am I an accomplished laureate by my admission.
As a mere poet, I do not strive to compose a magnum opus, 
but a meaningful collection of verses as a worthy composition.
If by chance, my poetry is interpreted and appreciated by some
who view my emotional imagery with soulful eyes of admiration,
I will credit my gypsy muse with her conspiratorial whispers
and amorous experiences as the impetus for my inspiration.
I hold the key to unlock my self-inflicted prison door,
and used when at last my pen has been laid to rest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 4/6/2025 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write from the first line to the last line. You and your pen have great skill and talent as you write away. Tell your pen it may Not rest. Have a blessed day with your win............
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Date: 4/6/2025 3:57:00 AM
Dear Lin, this is a very sincere and heartfelt poem and fits the prompt so well! I love the rhythm abd your creative wordplay throughout this as well as the humble voice that flows so seamlessly especially in lines "By no means am I an accomplished laureate by my admission." you definitely are an amazing poet and one that weaves words in such eloquence. I really love the ending too, how authentic you are! The flow and creative nature of your poem is worthy of all the accolades. Congrats on your top placement. Thank you for joining and for writing for the prompt too. Sending you light
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Date: 3/23/2025 6:30:00 AM
Lin, it's always very special to read poetry about the creative process itself and the magic that occurs when the process gets underway. The imagery you use of being imprisoned and unlocking what is deep inside is very striking indeed. I'm marking this as a favorite as its truly the most humble and positive description of authorship I've seen!! Smiles!!
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Date: 3/23/2025 6:48:00 AM
Duke, after reading Paul's kind comments and now your gracious remarks on my lines, I am truly humbled to have received praises from two men that I admire as poets and gentlemen. There are times when I should be attending to other things, but when words flow in us, we dare not build a dam. Thank you for honoring my poetry with your time and plaudits. Hugs for you.
Date: 3/23/2025 5:13:00 AM
Spellbinding dear Lin, the Muse certainly got a good grip of your pen in creating this devotional poem...you do the profession proud and have a honored place at the table. Imaginative, packed full of good lines and exhibiting that skill of yours. Bravo from a fellow prisoner...a life sentence is to be celebrated. From No 874632 ( Paul )
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Date: 3/23/2025 5:31:00 AM
Good day to you, Paul and thank you for your comments... as always, they are appreciated. I kind of got carried away while writing this one, so maybe I had chained myself to my desk, pen in hand. There'll be no pardon for good behavior because I don't always behave, but c'est la vie. Thanks again, my fellow inmate. I'm No. P1O2E3T4.
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