Prisoner

She jumped off the cliff, 
too fall from him. 
but she still saw him on her way down. 

she filled the tub, 
to drown the sight of him, 
yet his image remains in the bloody waters. 

she hung from a rope, 
to end the life in his world 
but she saw him still on the other side. 

she got in the car, 
all windows up, 
in the blazing sun. 
suffocating to draw from the sight of him, 
but even at her point she saw him outside her windows. 

In the middle of the desert she burns to flames... his voice, 
she hears his voice through the sands whisper her name, 
the heat waves waver a form him, 
...and he smiles. 
"always and forever" it sing. 

she lies in the middle of her cage looking out at the future. wondering
if it knows...
then the door opens and that dream ends..
"always and forever" he whispered. 

she looked towards the future and watched it fade away. 
"always and forever" she says, 
......."a prisoner".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 12:01 PM
Mandisa, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Mason Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 1:20 PM
Powerful write here that is now a "first round survivor" ... smile ... good luck in the contest, Mandisa !!
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April 10, 2009 at 4:20 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals Mandisa. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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April 4, 2009 at 9:44 PM
congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke
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January 29, 2009 at 9:39 AM
Congratulations on your beautiful poetry being featured this week..God Bless*Tyesha
Brown Avatar
January 28, 2009 at 5:30 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being chosen to feature this week. May you have many more excellent poems featured. Love, Carol
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January 27, 2009 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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January 26, 2009 at 10:43 AM
Congratulations Mandisa on "The Prisoner" being featured. Vince
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January 25, 2009 at 4:34 PM
Gripping and sad. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
Richards Avatar
January 25, 2009 at 1:09 PM
Wow...this was powerful and haunting! Congratulations on this wonderful poem being featured this week.~ Carrie
Daniells Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 3:31 PM
I love what you did in the first four stanzas...great work creating those amazing images resulting in death like that
Ehigiator Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 3:20 PM
This is so emotionally sad and yet it speaks truth to life. those who leave this world, leave us with so many memories, good or bad, whether we want them or not. Good write...Tyesha
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