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Prism of Age

I wander through childhood memories Kicking dust off feelings unexplored Perhaps now an old smile for young tears 26 Jan 2023 Tricube Poetry Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2023 4:54:00 PM

wow, this is a GEM. I love it, David. oh, and Congrats.

Fj Thomas

Date: 2/1/2023 4:34:00 PM

David this is beautiful. A happy/sad nostalgia :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2023 6:22:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem -

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/30/2023 6:06:00 AM

Congratulations! Love it!

David Bose

Date: 1/30/2023 5:23:00 AM

In Sara's rules, she mentioned a tricube might leave the reader with questions and reflection ... from this, with my old smile, I'm looking back and wondering how I reacted to younger situations. Nice you can bring that with so few words. Well done.

Terry Miller

Date: 1/30/2023 1:48:00 AM

Wonderful, congratulations

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/29/2023 9:29:00 PM

stupendously written; congrats for superb 1st

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/29/2023 8:44:00 PM

"old smile for young tears" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/29/2023 6:55:00 PM

Very nice, Congratulations, David:)

Michael Wegman

Date: 1/29/2023 8:31:00 AM

A masterpiece! Bravo & congrats on the win!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/29/2023 8:09:00 AM

This one touched a place of my inner being as I try to work through some times in my life that I can't really remember enough to know what my feelings should have been and even why they should be there. Thanks for sharing and for participating in my contest. Sara

David Mohn
Date: 1/29/2023 12:30:00 PM

Thank you Sara, for the wonderful comment as well as the placement :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/29/2023 7:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win David! :)