Prior To Surgery

Holding hands in the crowded corridor
  A tender moment amidst the horror

You smiled at me, and touched my heart
  I returned the favor ~ thus did we part
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 9:54 PM
Sometimes all it takes is one look. This sounds like one of those times.
Sands Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 1:09 PM
This one does have an impact. We'll written Gershon :)
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 4:12 PM
If I were from Hawaii, this one would have had a punch! :) gw
Mchattie Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 6:05 PM
Wow. So few words but they speak volumes. Well penned. Stay frosty my friend.
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 4:09 PM
I'll try to lower the voume next time, David. lol. Thanks for the visit. Take good care, Gershon
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