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Princess of Atlantis

Written: May 23, 2024

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I call you a Venus-blooded princess
deity related to grace and love
you, alone, lost track of your roots
you seem like an amnesiac orphan
searching for love
and a spot to deem abode
lingering emotion
still a sight of a shed dynasty
a voice from wide Hellenic chasm
deep into satin-waved azure sea.

You travel through life as a refugee
being unaware of your royalty
awaiting you is your dynasty
Ignorant of celestial ability
sliding nightly to kiss your feet
your modesty enhances your splendor
oblivious that angels revere you.

Blood flecks Earth's palms
vulture-vamoosed blood loss
fragmented feelings slapped at you
from men grody to your stature
you trade power for gossamer grief
saving those who lack to drain you
finishing a faintly flickering flame
once fatuous flared flawlessly.

You still fight valiantly
still, search for your ethnic kin
you've been banished, little knight
supplied by your ancient souls
tell you to heed the wave whispering
be quiet; listen to Atlantis' harp lament
you are infested with worms.

Pirates stole your Kismet
Zombies inveigle your regal elixir
oblivious disconsolate each air
eviscerate you and lay you bare
quenching hunger in esoteric fruit
while you bear ethereal anguish
crestfallen, reclaim what's yours
let the tides carry you home
your tenacity defeats lecherous
your breath creates waves
hold Elysian sword tightly
your veins are boiling with fire blood
focus on inner chimera samurai
return to your throne
wear your genuine crown.

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Duke Beaufort May 28, 2024 at 9:15 AM SP, it would be wonderful if the people and place reappeared, but since that is doubtful, your encouragement to the departed stands. It's something we can all relate to when we feel submerged or surrogated. We should never give up--at least while we are still breathing. Your work is inspiring!!!

Victor Buhagiar May 25, 2024 at 1:25 AM Your talent shines. Great take on Atlantis and its Princess. So many theories about the place.

Howard Kerr May 24, 2024 at 6:33 PM Dear Sotto Poet, You have written a truly fascinating piece. Your extraordinary vocabulary and apt use of colourful word palettes permeates this poem. A spectacular work encompassing dilemmas. I value your slants and insights on my recent submission

Paula Goldsmith May 24, 2024 at 9:46 AM Your "Princess of Atlantis" is a wonderful write/story. "Good Luck" if for a contest. I love reading your work. Have a wonderful day/weekend..................

Daniel Henry Rodgers May 24, 2024 at 6:42 AM Dear Sotto, This is a very powerful journey through themes of identity, struggle, and resilience. You really drew me into the emotional depths of your words. I really love your portrayal of the protagonist as a lost princess searching for her true home. A very profound piece. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Maria Williams May 24, 2024 at 6:03 AM I will reflect Vijay Soto, a deep write, full of imagery, description and love. Very haunting. Thanks for sharing. Maria

Vijay Pandit May 24, 2024 at 5:12 AM ---still a sight of a shed dynasty a voice from wide Hellenic chasm deep into satin-waved azure sea---awesome description for the deity related to grace and love--- a charming write, my friend.

Ink Empress May 23, 2024 at 11:39 PM I felt like this poem resonates with me on a very deep level! I used to always say that i live on venus etc. and the way youv described this princess, the struggles constant ebb and flow through life to fine serenity! So well articulated with excellent metaphors and descriptive diction’ i think this might be another one of your best poems written for me! So beautifully done! Elysian sword, inner samurai! Just excellent diction! The flow of poetic techniques in this is impeccable! Best wishes

Hilda Greenhough May 23, 2024 at 8:54 PM Terrific poem, which is mysterious, causes me to wonder what historical figure is this? I enjoy the scenario of a strong woman.

Richard Lamoureux May 23, 2024 at 8:18 PM You have an excellent voice for narration.

Richard Lamoureux May 23, 2024 at 8:17 PM Fabulous piece Sotto. Well done!

Tonye George May 23, 2024 at 7:00 PM This princess has surely seen hell and that's what makes her strong, unique and great. I love the body of the poem and how it flowed. Loved every line. "You travel through life as a refugee being unaware of your royalty awaiting you is your dynasty." Astounding Sotto. I sure do miss being on here.