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Primrose the Tasteless Queen

In the dead of night she came without a sound, The darkness brought shadows to her eyes, With a haughting gait she wore a mourning gown, Honey sweetened words was the perfect disguise, Heart in hand without any utterance of a word, Who would know that it was to be a grand mistake, A shift of shadows with nothing to be heard, She threw his heart into the waveless lake, In a timeless passage it descended the depths, For no eyes of the liquid darkness saw the fear, Of a wordless voice of the scepter breath, In the suffocating darkness it simply disappeared. (2017)

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Date: 8/14/2017 9:30:00 PM
WOW! This write is amazing beautiful and amazing dark and treacherous! And I thought Miss Mischievous Grins was bad..! Primrose is one bad chick! :) Excellent write Corwin!
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Corwin Donovan
Date: 8/14/2017 10:00:00 PM
LoL thank you Susan. However its nowhere near as beautiful as your poem Rapture :^)

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