Primordial Waves

From within the flux its breath sweeps the shoreline,
Sometimes spewing forth flotsam and jetsam
Lolling us to sleep with its soothing savoury sighs.
Its siren calls hypnotising the unwary and confidant.
Drawing us to depths of hidden fury and peace. 
Scouring the lands with an insatiable appetite,
Forever hungry, it’s stomach a pitiless pit of plenty.
Its minions devouring the fallen. Lost in opaque screams.

The rolling wave ripples through to the very soul, 
Its innocuous plate sparkles in white foamy trepidation.
Beckoning us, taunting us, through its congenital self. 
Primordial waves bathe our lives as we search the shore.
For peace, love and isolation, now flung and strewn.
Where hope of salvage dwell in our beachcombing souls.  
We wish to return from where once we came, we lost embryos.
Our mislaid mother calls, still we newcomers neglect her voice. 



5th Aug 2013..........S.de Burca
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hicks Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 11:33 AM
This sure was an intriguing poem ... almost mystical with the way life beckons back toward the sea in your final lines. I liked the way you expressed this, Seosamh, especially with phrase like "soothing savory sighs". PS. I think you meant "bathe" instead of "bath" in one line ...
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May 28, 2016 at 7:34 PM
Hi thanks you for stopping by and reading. Wow good spot embarrassed now that I didn't see that before I posted it. Thanks .
A   Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 12:30 PM
SEOSAMH, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
De Burca Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Hi Linda great to hear from you, I've not been on for some time, so was nice to hear someone had read my poem. Thank you for the support and appreciate the kind words. Posted a short poem today, look forward to any feed back.
A  Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 12:38 PM
SEOSAMH, Enjoyed reading your poem today. LUV **SKAT**
De Burca Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 8:52 AM
Hi and very sorry in the long delay in responding to your kind words on my poem. I have not been on for many months. Thank you for the support in reading my attempts at poetry. I appreciate your kind words.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 10:44 AM
totally excellent piece of writing irish waves breathing beautiful piece
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July 24, 2015 at 8:48 PM
Hi sorry for the late reply to your generous comment on my poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my effort.
Palmer Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 1:07 PM
love it S.de Burca,,,peace
De Burca Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 5:38 PM
Thank you for reading and leaving a nice comment.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 1:23 AM
As a Makebelieve guesswork theoretical piece this is fantastic imaginative. I enjoyd it as much as i enjoy any fairytale anecdote with leaps of reasoning n faith.. Great to read u again. Kudos for the literary creativity here.
De Burca Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 10:15 PM
I am glad you enjoyed my poem, thank you for taking the time to read it and write a kind comment.
Walker  Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 6:47 PM
Beautifully written Seosamh... Enjoyed.... Verlena - Oblivion Dark Sunshine
De Burca Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 10:13 PM
Thank you for the kind comment
Jones Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Hello....been awhile.....loved everything about this one....outstanding....
De Burca Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 9:43 AM
Hi and so nice to hear from you again :). Thank you for such a nice comment on my poem. (Its good to be back again).
Walker  Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 9:17 PM
Good write... You swam ashore beautifully... Verlena
De Burca Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 2:52 PM
Thank you for your comment and taking the time to read my poem :)
Fox Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 4:31 PM
How really lovely ! A most beautiful poem !
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February 8, 2014 at 6:25 PM
Thank you for reading and taking the time to write a nice comment.
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