Primordial Treasure

Ancient pottery,
Concealed by the sands of time:
Unearthed by the wind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 12, 2010 at 2:12 PM
Archeaology is another subject i enjoy Raul, and this poem captures time, where artifacts have been hidden and found by natures elements >> James
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February 12, 2010 at 12:17 PM
Great write in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my write about betrayal. I could feel the pain of the young woman myself. Sara
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February 12, 2010 at 5:31 AM
Visual scene Raul with depth and emotion in your choice of words.. thankxxx for sharing this morning and again for a wonderful new contest.. exciting challenges to the contestant to provide new poetry for the entries... u are a true inspiration Raul.. luv.. LInda-Marie..
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