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Primordial Treasure

Ancient pottery, Concealed by the sands of time: Unearthed by the wind.

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James Fraser

Date: 2/12/2010 2:12:00 PM

Archeaology is another subject i enjoy Raul, and this poem captures time, where artifacts have been hidden and found by natures elements >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/12/2010 12:17:00 PM

Great write in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my write about betrayal. I could feel the pain of the young woman myself. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/12/2010 5:31:00 AM

Visual scene Raul with depth and emotion in your choice of words.. thankxxx for sharing this morning and again for a wonderful new contest.. exciting challenges to the contestant to provide new poetry for the entries... u are a true inspiration Raul.. luv.. LInda-Marie..