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primordial soup

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Primordial Soup In the cosmos kitchen of distant past, When first thoughts of life's creation were cast, A unique recipe, made its debut, 'Primordial soup', life's creation brew. Take 6 cups of seawater from seashore head, Where precursor molecules are purebred, With carbon atoms, molecules galore, With hydrogen, oxygen, many more. Add a sprinkle of salt, make a strong brine, Which becomes life's spark conductor benign. Now comes the tricky part, nature's assault, To get a living being, fused, gestalt. Set the brew aside to foment and age. It won't ferment, there's no life at this stage. Wait for the thunder clouds to roll on in, With lightning flashes blasting to break-in. Add a long cast-iron wand to the pot. Place it outside in a clear exposed spot. Stand well clear, be patient, wait for the bolt, To hit the pot, making life with a jolt! With a bit of good luck and fate combined, Your precursor chemical mix maligned, Will become magic primordial soup, destined to seed entire planets with life. Your soup is infinitely expandable, With all sorts of tasty things edible. For life creates its own ingredients, Limited only by your expedients! You name it, vegan, keto, carnivore. Chock full of all living things you adore!

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Date: 8/23/2023 12:39:00 PM
I've got a name for it but I don't use profanity so... Cute poem though
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Date: 8/23/2023 12:40:00 PM
Oh I do wonder! Thanks Cheers

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