Primitive Primrose Prose

To Rose! To Rose! a primitive prose

Your rose, like a rose to my nose

It pricks with thorns, but, on my heart adorns

Till my heart grows and forever glows


To Rose! To Rose! a primitive prose 

I'll follow wherever the wind blows

A pleasant breeze, from primitive seas

Swear I'll sail to wherever it goes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 7:03 PM
Pretty! I especially like the refrain!
Freie Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 7:09 PM
I couldn't refrain, in sun, in the rain, a primitive rose, knows where the wind blows.
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