Primitive Passions

Midnight at the beach Moonlight on our sandy feet Moist lips warm and sweet April 9, 2020 12 pm PST English Haiku 5-7-5

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/9/2020 5:05:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, Delightful. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs Darlene xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/10/2020 1:08:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, I have never been to a beach at midnight. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs Darlene xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/9/2020 5:30:00 PM

Hi Darlene...I forgot how great beaches are at midnight.have fun Hugs, Panagiota

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/9/2020 4:04:00 PM

Your haikus are delicately done, well penned.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/9/2020 4:08:00 PM

I really do appreciate hearing this, Caren. Thank you. Will be visiting your poetry after I eat lunch))) Panagiota xx