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primeval -

oh wrap me close dear jungle deep, with fronds and fruits entwined
          and hold me to your ancient emerald breast -
I long to hear those thrums within, the pulse of thickets vined
     and feel your misty essence fill my chest

oh let your warming whispers brush the tympans of my ears
          with sultry songs of woodland mysteries -
face-to-sky I'm pattered with your maze's torrid tears
     as heaven weeps your primal histories

your canopy, breeze-tickled, shakes its tresses high aloft
          to daub upon my cheek your orchid breath -
whisp'ring o'er the blooms and dells to shrug their shoulders, soft
     through tragic tangles worthy of Macbeth

your winding streams and waterfalls, your scents of sweet and spice
          sing songs of wooded wonder, rare and rife -
I pray aloud a blessing for this perfect paradise
     and all such spots divine, the blooms ... of life.







~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Strand Select 2 Any Form Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 1st Place ~  in the "Picturesque" Poetry Contest, Eve Roper, Judge & Sponsor.
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Roper Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 9:35 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand’s contest. Hugs Eve
Chiri Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 1:23 PM
Gregory congratulations on your top win!;)
Kauffman Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 12:24 PM
Congratulations on your win. I was transported by your picture in words to the forests I have loved. Really lovely - beautifully penned.
Michael Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 3:27 PM
A winner It is...
Barden Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 3:43 AM
As are YOU, my friend - many thanks and blessings! :o)
Blodgett Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 10:03 PM
Imagery intrinsic to the passion that it serves!! Stunning and a fave! Lonna
Barden Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 3:43 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Lonna, I greatly appreciate your comments! Blessings! :o) <3
Sands Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:30 PM
Congratulations for your win Gregory :)
Barden Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 3:42 AM
Thank you very kindly, Heidi - that's very sweet of you! :o) <3
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:14 PM
such incredible imagery Greg, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Barden Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 3:42 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Jan, that's very sweet of you ... as always! Blessings! :o) <3
Hamilton Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 1:15 PM
Congrats on another win G, majestic writing!
Barden Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 3:41 AM
Very kind of you, Sir John, I thank you so much! :o)
Andresen Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 7:55 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful top winning poem, Gregory :) - A really beautiful picture Eve chose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Barden Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 3:41 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise, I'm happy you liked my poem! Blessings, my friend! :o) <3
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 1:43 AM
A FAVE--congrats on placing first with this gem! ~ Aloha always William
Barden Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 3:40 AM
Thank you so very much, William, that is very kind, my friend! Blessings! :o)
Mcintosh Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 12:47 AM
This is beautiful... Congratulations and Blessings :)
Barden Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 3:40 AM
Many kind thanks, Regina, I so appreciate it! :o) <3
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 11:50 PM
This is exquisite imagery coupled with nature's irresistible allure Greg. It is very deserving of your First Placement! I wish I could write this amazingly! Congratulations my friend! A Fave for me! : ) xxoo
Barden Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 3:40 AM
You are so very kind, Connie, and you CAN and DO write like this! Please don't sell yourself short, you are a wonderful poet, and an even MORE wonderful friend! Blessings! :o) <3
Roper Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 11:00 PM
Love your imagery , Gregory, congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve
Barden Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 3:38 AM
Thank you so very much, Eve, I was so honored by this placement ... wasn't sure quite where to go with this one, so I just followed that creature inside! Blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3
Hamilton Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 10:33 AM
Beautiful artistry G, loved this the rhyme scheme everything, the personification was impressive, always a satisfying read from you.
Barden Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 11:47 PM
Many kind thanks, Brother, I'm pleased you enjoyed this one - blessings! :o)
Sergi Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 7:34 PM
Hi Lindsay: Your eloquent poem beckons Nature and beckons it's beautiful cascade!
Barden Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 11:46 PM
LOL - or Hepsebah!
Barden Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 8:24 PM
Thank you kindly, Ralph, I appreciate the comment, however my name is GREG, not Lindsay ... no worries, I've been called much worse! ;o)
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