Pride

PRIDE You worked really hard Path of life was uneven. You have stumbled on each step. Truth was only guard. Long journey was not serene. You had not fled to escape. Deceit, betrayal jealousy, failure, pain attacked, but you stood erect. Love came parallel Your effort was not in vain. Success proved you the perfect. Sure you are proud to win the troublesome game. Act as an Idol rather. Don’t be rude or loud as you have attained the fame. Pride has no right to hurt other. 01/16/16 SEDOKA CONTEST Third Place Sponsor Laura Loo

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2016 9:14:00 PM

Anisha, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA -

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2016 12:05:00 PM

Amazing Sedoka poem has landed on this winners’ list. Congrats on your win. Sara

Skat A

Date: 1/18/2016 10:48:00 AM

ANISHA, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**

Anisha Dutta
Date: 1/18/2016 11:03:00 AM

Thanks and Love. Anisha D

Lu Loo

Date: 1/18/2016 10:43:00 AM

Anisha, thank you very much for being a part of my contest. I loved it, but the syllable count you used in the first stanza was: 5-8-7-5-7-7. I hated to do that, it was a great poem. Thank you for being a part of my contest *smiles* -luloo

Anisha Dutta
Date: 1/18/2016 11:05:00 AM

I am rectifying. Thanks for consideration. Anisha D