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Pride

there across the wind rides my silly pride at times a sturdy arrow at times a butterfly how often i chose to follow the path of the sturdy arrow its landing was hard to find however, when i chose to try the path of the butterfly never, was i too far behind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/10/2009 1:57:00 PM
Good structure... all the best.
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Date: 2/18/2009 9:15:00 PM
really profound-- I liked it alot!!
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Date: 2/18/2009 8:59:00 PM
I totally understand this piece. I can only pull off the arrow for a short amount of time then the butterfly sprouts wings. Laurie
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