Pride

Pride Pride corrupts each mind Flies on powerful bleak wings To perch on weak souls Contaminates heart Pouring venom in eye's view Satan's evil scheme To kill brotherhood on earth False egos hamper Relations beyond repair 6/11/2018 Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/11/2018 1:51:00 PM

Well done, Pubasha. Congrats on your top win.

Purbasha Roy
Date: 11/12/2018 2:59:00 AM

Thank you so much

Susan Palli

Date: 11/7/2018 12:47:00 PM

Love the line, “pouring venom in eyes view” Congrats, Purbasha

Purbasha Roy
Date: 11/8/2018 1:01:00 AM

Thank you

Deb Radke

Date: 11/6/2018 8:39:00 PM

I had to read your poem several times to appreciate all the meaning you've written into it. This is well done. I like especially your line 'flies on powerful bleak wings'. Excellent imagery all within this write. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Take care. Deb

Purbasha Roy
Date: 11/7/2018 2:57:00 AM

Thank you much for your visits and these words of appreciation.Encouraging

Edward Ibeh

Date: 11/6/2018 4:11:00 PM

Thanks for participating in my contest, Purbasha!:-) Loved this. Congratulations on your top win!

Purbasha Roy
Date: 11/6/2018 8:30:00 PM

Thank you Sir for the placement.Obliged