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Prickly Love

impaled am I
want as pierced as need…
thorns of your soul

love hurtssenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

October 16, 2014 at 9:45 PM

Quite a tragic image!! gosh, what contest was this for? I am seeing it got a win. WEll, Congrats to you!

David Mohn

October 17, 2014 at 7:38 AM

Hi Andrea - this was for judy Konos "The Lazy Contest" where you could submit anything you wanted so I gave this one a shot - thanks for the comment and have a wonderful weekend :)

Kayod5 Kayode

October 16, 2014 at 8:38 AM

Another hit David,congrats.

Dr.Ram Mehta

October 16, 2014 at 5:34 AM

Wonderfully penned, david, congrats on the win

Jan Allison

October 16, 2014 at 4:43 AM

many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Judy Konos

October 15, 2014 at 11:37 PM

No bad writers in this contest! You were fast, furious, humorous, romantic,lost, found, sought after, wondrous! THANKS FOR ENTERING! I'M HAPPY!

Eileen Manassian

October 15, 2014 at 5:05 AM

Yes...very much to ponder on in this write. You got me at the title! :) But what is a rose without thorns? It does not exist. Thanks for your visit to my work.