Prey To the Snake

Hopper in the grass
Hiding from the birds above
Falls prey to the snake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Fraser Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 2:35 PM
Very hard in nature to keep ones wits about them, so many eyes and mouths about>>i shall read more another day Abe and get up to speed, kool writing>>James
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December 17, 2008 at 9:57 AM
Is it a rabbit? Hope it's a grasshopper! Good job!
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November 30, 2008 at 2:04 PM
Sometimes we get occupied watching out for things and when we least expect it something else grabs us. Nice Haiku.
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