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Pretty Lady Impression

Pretty lady be not sad Your eyes sparkling and shiny What is your face hiding from Living colorful all day Many colors you do wear Show your pretty face to me No more hiding please reveal Be yourself and be happy. Date Written: 10/18/2020 Used: Visual 3 IMPRESSIONS Poetry Contest Sponsored by: nette onclaud 5 Place IMPRESSIONS Contest Judged:10/25/2020 Sponsored by: nette onclaud

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Date: 10/26/2020 8:12:00 AM
Maybe she has bad teeth. What else could she be hiding from otherwise - mystery woman - clever write Paula. Hugs and kisses, Jennifer.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/27/2020 4:55:00 PM
Thanks, for writing. So glad you like it. Yes, she is a mystery woman. Have a wonderful day.............
Date: 10/20/2020 5:02:00 AM
Hi Paula Your poem brings to mind this quote from Rabbie Burns: - "O wad some power the giftie gie us -- To see oorsels as ithers see us". I hope I have understood this correctly. Kindest regards Bill
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/20/2020 1:52:00 PM
Thank You, for writing. I have not read your quote before. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your day.......................
Date: 10/18/2020 6:25:00 PM
One can only be happy when one s being oneself. A very impressionable poem winning wishes being sent to you Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/18/2020 10:19:00 PM
Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your wishes. So glad you like this one. You are so right, about being yourself. Have a wonderful day.......................