Paula Goldsmith Poet Free verse

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LET IT RAIN Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud.

Pretty Clouds Let It Rain Down

"Pretty clouds filled with water, then it rains down." By Poet 


My pretty pink rose garden is wilting,
they need a drink and a bath.
Fluffy gray clouds let it rain down,
sweet rose scent fills the air.
As the rain drifts off,
puddles stay behind.
Now birds can drink and take a bath.

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David Crandall January 19, 2026 at 8:45 PM nice one, it's fun to wash birds take a bath, my grandparents had a bird bath Paula Goldsmith January 20, 2026 at 8:35 AM Thanks for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my fun "Pretty Clouds Let It Rain" to be a, nice one. It was fun to write. I love to watch birds take a bath. No birdbath here but I had one at my last home. Have a wonderful day writing away as we wait for Spring to show up.....................

Joanna Daniel January 19, 2026 at 7:58 AM Lovely, I was thinking of puddles, but couldn't fit it in my poem... Paula Goldsmith January 19, 2026 at 9:32 AM Thanks for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my fun ""Pretty Clouds Let It Rain" to be, Lovely. It was fun to write. We need rain here. Have a wonderful day writing away as we wait for Spring to show up.....................

Gershon Wolf January 18, 2026 at 8:47 PM You caught me off guard with the last line there, Pala. Very sweet of you to think of the birds first and foremost, Gershon Paula Goldsmith January 19, 2026 at 9:30 AM Thanks for stopping to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my fun ""Pretty Clouds Let It Rain" write. It was fun to write. It is always good to think about the little birds. They also need a drink/bath. Have a wonderful day writing away as we wait for Spring to show up.....................

Jay Narain January 18, 2026 at 9:41 AM Nice poem. Welcome to spring like weather. Paula Goldsmith January 18, 2026 at 12:28 PM Thanks for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my fun ""Pretty Clouds Let It Rain" to be a, Nice poem. It was fun to write. It turned cold here. I think Spring is Not ready to come out and play. We need rain. Have a wonderful day writing away as we wait for Spring to show up.....................

Paula Goldsmith January 18, 2026 at 9:24 AM "Pretty Clouds Let It Rain" ~ Date Written: 1/18/2026 ~ Written By Human Poet....................