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Pretty Blessed

Not quite herself, her forehead hot; it seems she has thrown up a lot. And so she’s come to stay with me, exposing me to what she’s got. The baby and the other three, off to the pool to try and see if they can learn a stroke or two, around the water, safer be. I think I had some things to do, but I’m not even sure that’s true. I’ll leap at spending time with her, if only for an hour or two. And so we will not be deterred, and in agreement, we concur that propped up on the bed to rest is something that we both prefer. She snuggles in, and that’s the best. If truth be told, I must confess I love to watch the chimpanzees, and with her here, I’m pretty blessed. ————— For the Rubaiyat Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by Soto Poet Written on 5/26/22

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Date: 6/14/2022 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Pretty Blessed" is a lovely Rubaiyat write. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 6/14/2022 11:50:00 AM
Thanks, Paula - you as well!
Date: 6/13/2022 8:22:00 PM
A beautifully written poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/13/2022 5:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest Jeff, you did a wonderful job in this poem. Best regards
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 6/14/2022 11:51:00 AM
Thank you for hosting the contest. I think the rubaiyat is a neat form.
Date: 5/26/2022 8:42:00 PM
'Bedtime with Bonzo' comes to mind. ~ Ronnie Ray Gun
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Date: 5/26/2022 11:21:00 AM
Aw, this is so delightful, Jeff. But I hope you don't come down with what made her sick. She sounds like a delightful little girl, and you are indeed blessed.
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