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She Walked By She walked through the crowd, softly offered the urchin shelter and food. He scoffed at her penury being and ran away. She walked through the crowd, saw the urchin and quietly walked by..... She walked through the crowd, a smiling figure creeped closer whose preternatural satanic light lit in her charred soul and burnt accounts. She walked through the crowd, iceberg thoughts of the worthless defrosted as she walked by..... She walked through the crowd, pampering her cherub whose hand she held tight. Old memories were getting dimmer when one in a crowd waved at her. She and her love, hand in hand, happily walked by in a crowd. April 12, 2016 For Sara Kendrick

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Date: 5/21/2016 8:40:00 AM
Your poem was awesome, creative and unique..Thank you for entering my Preterition Contest..I am sorry for being so long in congratulating you but things have been happening here that I could not control..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/21/2016 9:52:00 AM
Thanks Sara! Just don't apologise. We are all bogged down with our own problems. Love, Balveen

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