Pretentious Poem 2

Blackened cubes of naturality stomache across the pains of a million screaming faces
Crushed by the weight of two ton pound horsehell and drowned in the unthoughtfulness of the moon's cruel disregard towards the emotions of the ground-up grime of the Earth.
Her circular orbit brings punishment towards the agony and despair of crying mothers
Wailing and screaming all day but her arrogance mutes all. 
Selfish. Unjustified. No one hears the cries of undeserved gnashing and torture
Day after day, she slams and beats down her unrelenting eternal rage upon them.
Nothing to save them. Nothing can fire bring upon their release.
The Earth is temporary. The Moon is forever. 
Even after the fire she will continue on in her rage. The sources forced to suffer
her eternal beatings even after the rest of time and time on again. 
Screaming and crying and grieving for the rest of eternity. 
No death. Just the sweet eternal bliss of immortality.



(Originally Written 3/21/2019)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 7:23 AM
Alan, this is a terrific sequel to poem one.
Pingas69 Avatar
July 24, 2019 at 1:19 AM
Thank you very much. These first two were more storytelling narratives. Just about everything I publish from here on out is going to be much more personal.
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