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Lush pretentious garden sculpts to be gleaned. Fullness of repose with sweet quiet sound, fruitful, and forbearance draw nature's ground. The sensuous feel, oft seasons has seen. Butterflies noiselessly stir round fragrant sweet allure angel's tears; with airy grace scatter elsewhere to perennial space. Ants, beetles, and birds herald, spring vagrants. Wind nimble bend forth, leaflets surrender mere fragrance in its resilience breath span, devour one complete, hence its roots began. Spring vernal equinox, has force to render. Spring arises in gallantly through ardor in the wake of hints still left from winter. 2/22/2019

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Date: 8/1/2021 11:09:00 AM
Love your poem and congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/26/2019 9:52:00 PM
A lovely poem and a joy to read, especially during this most coldest time of the year ... Keep up the wonderful writing Eve!
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Date: 2/26/2019 10:21:00 PM
Thank you, Kelly, you always so kind and always enjoy your visits . Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 2/26/2019 2:15:00 PM
Well-deserved win with this sonnet. (And how about that picture too!) ~ gw
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Date: 2/26/2019 10:22:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon, you're so kind. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 2/25/2019 2:41:00 PM
Lovely sonnet, Eve. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/26/2019 10:22:00 PM
Thank you, Line. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 2/25/2019 9:34:00 AM
Beautiful, I wish it were here; we're still in winter with the weirdest weather I've ever seen.
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Date: 2/26/2019 10:23:00 PM
Thank you, M.L., I'm glad that it isn't so cold here. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 2/25/2019 2:52:00 AM
- After a cold, dark and long winter ... we all yearn for spring - Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/26/2019 10:25:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine, I cannot say the weather is comfy , but it is better than everyone else I hear. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 2/25/2019 1:37:00 AM
I could visualize the lovely scene Eve. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo
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Date: 2/26/2019 10:26:00 PM
Thank you, Connie. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 2/23/2019 9:24:00 PM
Ah Spring, I’m ready, well done Eve, best wishes...
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Date: 2/26/2019 10:26:00 PM
Thank you,Charlie. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 2/23/2019 5:43:00 AM
Eve, you write exquisitely of a garden that has a heart. Love it!
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Date: 2/23/2019 2:36:00 PM
Thank you, Caren. You are always a pleasure with the kindest words. Hugs Eve
Date: 2/23/2019 5:05:00 AM
Well done my friend!!
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Date: 2/23/2019 2:36:00 PM
Thank you, Bobby, my friend
Date: 2/23/2019 2:33:00 AM
Nicely written!
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Date: 2/23/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thank you, Valerie. Hugs Eve
Date: 2/23/2019 2:01:00 AM
Very beautiful, in the middle of winter, I would take any garden about now!!!! :)
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Date: 2/23/2019 2:38:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. You are always a pleasure

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