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Pretending To Miss Everything

a gorgeous Eiffel tower is in the background of Peachtree Boulevard We know it is not THE Eiffel tower, but it is amazing to see anyway Atlanta Georgia has a flair all her own, her desserts are legend. Hostas, foxglove, azaleas and wisteria trees line this piece of heaven. I am lured into a pretty café with crepe myrtle trees and daisies. The greeting is straight from the south “how ya’ll do’n?” Beignets are brought to my table before I order. Just a little something to tide you over, honey. Yes, they still call you honey here, and it feels okay. Other customers begin arriving in twos and threes. I get out my novel and pretend to read, Missing nothing, but pretending to miss everything plotting my next six poems around strangers’ conversations.

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Date: 9/17/2023 7:45:00 PM
Hey Caren. I dig your poem PRETENDING TO MISS EVERYTHING. lots of imagery. I could see the scene. I enjoyed this. VB Rogers black panther
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/18/2023 7:20:00 PM
Thank you Val I appreciate it
Date: 9/16/2023 11:32:00 AM
you've captured this experience perfectly, caren! i very much enjoyed...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/18/2023 7:20:00 PM
I like it when you come by Ilene

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