Pretending To Miss Everything

a gorgeous Eiffel tower is in the background of Peachtree Boulevard
We know it is not THE Eiffel tower, but it is amazing to see anyway
Atlanta Georgia has a flair all her own, her desserts are legend.
Hostas, foxglove, azaleas and wisteria trees line this piece of heaven.

I am lured into a pretty café with crepe myrtle trees and daisies.
The greeting is straight from the south “how ya’ll do’n?”
Beignets are brought to my table before I order.
Just a little something to tide you over, honey.

Yes, they still call you honey here, and it feels okay.
Other customers begin arriving in twos and threes.
I get out my novel and pretend to read,
Missing nothing, but pretending to miss everything
plotting my next six poems around strangers’ conversations.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 7:45 PM
Hey Caren. I dig your poem PRETENDING TO MISS EVERYTHING. lots of imagery. I could see the scene. I enjoyed this. VB Rogers black panther
Krutsinger Avatar
September 18, 2023 at 7:20 PM
Thank you Val I appreciate it
Bauer Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 11:32 AM
you've captured this experience perfectly, caren! i very much enjoyed...
Krutsinger Avatar
September 18, 2023 at 7:20 PM
I like it when you come by Ilene
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