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Pretending So Pretty

Nodding smiles in Jester's torture Nothing escapes the fallen tree Close my eyes in hollows hiding Desperation saddening... Contest-- Arbitrium Divisa 2-- by Gregory Richard Barden 7/17/2019 2nd Place

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Date: 10/1/2023 3:14:00 PM
Nothing escapes nodding smiles in hollows hiding. Always be cautious, with those pretending. Congratulations Christian, on second place in the contest. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Christian Alexander
Date: 10/2/2023 1:18:00 PM
Thank you Brandi. I am pleased to have a great post such as yourself compliment my work--

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