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Presumptuous

Presumptuous City slicker, soul breaker Night hawker, headhunter Fire starter, mayhem maker Risk taker, maniacal monster Forecast reader, global disorder Bogus soothsayer, dreams slayer! Penned: 01/13/2023 2:13 a.m. West Palm Beach Florida

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Date: 2/3/2023 10:50:00 AM
A creative write. The world is mad and I am living in it. Have a great/blessed  day...............
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Date: 2/4/2023 3:39:00 PM
Thanks you. We're in a rotten world at the moment, thinking positive it won't smell worse as time goes. Hope the sun's up where you are!...ab
Date: 1/21/2023 4:28:00 PM
Makes me think of a news report I saw the other day about the number of alligators found in people's pools or the increase in bears that wander into yards. Who is responsible for the "mayhem" of which you speak? Sad. Your poem makes me think of an old song by Joni Mitchell, "They paved paradise and put up a parking lot".
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Date: 1/21/2023 6:35:00 PM
The world is in turmoil, country against country, tribe against tribe--humans dragging nature's wonders to extinction. Forest, grasslands turned into concrete jungles, just like what Joni Mitchell's lamented. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Marikate!...ab
Date: 1/17/2023 5:30:00 AM
The beat of the city filled with mayhem...
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Date: 1/17/2023 12:41:00 PM
Like Earth, or some messed up metropolis! Lol! Thank you, Joseph...ab
Date: 1/16/2023 7:16:00 PM
To pluck something out of context: I was a headhunter, believe it or not -- and sometimes I don't even believe it anymore -- from 1979 - 1981 and 1983 - 1987. ~ He of Nine Lives
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 1/17/2023 12:38:00 PM
You must have been in some Special Forces squad to have accomplished your missions! Lol...ab, Peaceful Warrior.
Date: 1/16/2023 1:33:00 AM
There are so many of these evil persons and probably more. No wonder this world is in turmoil.
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Date: 1/17/2023 12:43:00 PM
We need "Champions" to defeat Evil. Thanks V.B...ab
Date: 1/14/2023 9:59:00 AM
Anselmo, It appears like we are both sipping from the same fountain since I just loaded a poem that is quite similar to this one on how the global crisis has affected people all around the world. I truly loved reading this poem today.
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 1/20/2023 9:53:00 AM
We were Lasaad. The fountain next to the Xerox machine! Lol. Thanks for your appreciating this poem...ab

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