Pressed Closely

in the highlight of, a distant sky- one filled with love simple thoughts of you, break through- sapphire blue the sun waits patiently- to slowly dip into the sea, for me as moments are pressed closely
~ a little scribble ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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May Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 7:48 AM
A merge of sun and sea as thoughts merge with heartbeats, Lovely write Brandy, hugs
Nicole Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 5:24 PM
Such a beautiful thing to say. Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Callus Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 11:12 AM
"As moments are pressed closely"...holding on to lovely memories in which love takes centre stage (even the sun lingers...). Such a delightful poem, Brandy! ~ Hugs // paul
Nicole Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 7:11 PM
Such a lovely thought- "even the sun lingers" Yes, it does. I am such a romantic. So sweet of you to place your kind words upon this simple scribble of mine. Thank you, Paul. You are such a sweet-heart. :) Hugs, Brandy
Coulstock Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 8:48 AM
Another beautiful “little scribble “and totally inspirational. Thank you Brandy for always reaching my heart and soul with your words. June.
Nicole Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Thank you June. Such a beautiful name. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Your kind words always lift my heart. :) Brandy
Toney Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 7:23 PM
Brandy, your lovely poem takes me back to 1983, at the Palmas Del Mar resort in Humacao, Puerto Rico. I arrived on a Sunday for a 3-day business meeting. My wife would fly in on Thursday. I sat for hours in an elevated lifeguard chair on the beach, keenly anticipating my wife’s arrival, watching the sun in the sapphire blue sky “dip into the (turquoise) sea.” This is a definite fav for me!
Nicole Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 7:50 PM
Soft smile. :) I am happy that my words could take you back to another time- another place. I appreciate you sharing your story with me. I can see this image you paint perfectly. Thank you Mark for your wonderful comment and for favoring this little scribble of mine. ~ Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 6:00 PM
May your moments be always pressed together closely for eternity somewhere between the light and the dark...
Nicole Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 6:46 PM
Thank you John. :) I appreciate your kind words. Your comment could be in a poem. Simply beautiful indeed. ~ Brandy
Green Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 4:25 PM
And a soft, beautiful and enchanting little scribble it is. This one gets a "Sigh" from me. :)
Nicole Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 4:37 PM
Thank you Chris. :) A soft sigh escapes. Such a wonderful thing to say. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy
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