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Pressed Closely

in the highlight of, a distant sky- one filled with love simple thoughts of you, break through- sapphire blue the sun waits patiently- to slowly dip into the sea, for me as moments are pressed closely ~ a little scribble ~

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Joseph May

Date: 7/17/2024 7:48:00 AM

A merge of sun and sea as thoughts merge with heartbeats, Lovely write Brandy, hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 6/4/2021 11:12:00 AM

"As moments are pressed closely"...holding on to lovely memories in which love takes centre stage (even the sun lingers...). Such a delightful poem, Brandy! ~ Hugs // paul

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/4/2021 7:11:00 PM

Such a lovely thought- "even the sun lingers" Yes, it does. I am such a romantic. So sweet of you to place your kind words upon this simple scribble of mine. Thank you, Paul. You are such a sweet-heart. :) Hugs, Brandy

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 8/25/2018 8:48:00 AM

Another beautiful “little scribble “and totally inspirational. Thank you Brandy for always reaching my heart and soul with your words. June.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/25/2018 12:52:00 PM

Thank you June. Such a beautiful name. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Your kind words always lift my heart. :) Brandy

Mark Toney

Date: 8/23/2018 7:23:00 PM

Brandy, your lovely poem takes me back to 1983, at the Palmas Del Mar resort in Humacao, Puerto Rico. I arrived on a Sunday for a 3-day business meeting. My wife would fly in on Thursday. I sat for hours in an elevated lifeguard chair on the beach, keenly anticipating my wife’s arrival, watching the sun in the sapphire blue sky “dip into the (turquoise) sea.” This is a definite fav for me!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/23/2018 7:50:00 PM

Soft smile. :) I am happy that my words could take you back to another time- another place. I appreciate you sharing your story with me. I can see this image you paint perfectly. Thank you Mark for your wonderful comment and for favoring this little scribble of mine. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 8/23/2018 6:00:00 PM

May your moments be always pressed together closely for eternity somewhere between the light and the dark...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/23/2018 6:46:00 PM

Thank you John. :) I appreciate your kind words. Your comment could be in a poem. Simply beautiful indeed. ~ Brandy

Chris Green

Date: 8/23/2018 4:25:00 PM

And a soft, beautiful and enchanting little scribble it is. This one gets a "Sigh" from me. :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/23/2018 4:37:00 PM

Thank you Chris. :) A soft sigh escapes. Such a wonderful thing to say. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy