Preserved In My Breath

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In motion through all spiritual existence, my warm, cool, tendrils leave a trail through long distance under the shadows of the cosmos in peaceful coexistence. I sigh with devotion, the beauty nature has become with my assistance. I touch and caress you without any resistance. I look at creation, a sweet, innocent child, and I love the way it moves. My Warm, cool, tendrils leave a trail through long distance, feasting in pristine, faith, and Thanksgiving. Humanity approves. 11/5/2017 Personification

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Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 2/24/2018 12:34:00 PM

Hi Eve this is beautiful and rhyming with nice message in it............

Probir Gupta

Date: 11/9/2017 9:58:00 PM

Beautifully profound ... Rich poetic lines, Eve ...

Kristina Whitmore

Date: 11/8/2017 12:50:00 PM

This brought much thought to my mind when I read the line, "under the shadows of the cosmos in peaceful coexistence." Being young and seeking to discover how to find those to exist with that have the same future interests.

David Smith

Date: 11/6/2017 8:50:00 PM

Can't find fault with sentiment or way you have written it. Important for us all to find the beauty in our imperfect world. Too easy to look for negatives. Sorry I have not stopped by fopr a while. Fondest regards David in NZ