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Preserved In My Breath

In motion through all spiritual existence, my warm, cool, tendrils leave a trail through long distance under the shadows of the cosmos in peaceful coexistence. I sigh with devotion, the beauty nature has become with my assistance. I touch and caress you without any resistance. I look at creation, a sweet, innocent child, and I love the way it moves. My Warm, cool, tendrils leave a trail through long distance, feasting in pristine, faith, and Thanksgiving. Humanity approves. 11/5/2017
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Imtiaz Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 12:34 PM
Hi Eve this is beautiful and rhyming with nice message in it............
Gupta Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 9:58 PM
Beautifully profound ... Rich poetic lines, Eve ...
Whitmore Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 12:50 PM
This brought much thought to my mind when I read the line, "under the shadows of the cosmos in peaceful coexistence." Being young and seeking to discover how to find those to exist with that have the same future interests.
Smith Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 8:50 PM
Can't find fault with sentiment or way you have written it. Important for us all to find the beauty in our imperfect world. Too easy to look for negatives. Sorry I have not stopped by fopr a while. Fondest regards David in NZ
Cozart Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 10:09 AM
This is beautiful, Eve.
Salehi Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 2:48 AM
So beautiful... so warm....
Vaso Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 11:59 PM
Wow, lovely Eve! Good luck in contest! Hugs!
Sands Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 1:49 PM
So beautiful this is Eve. I love it :)
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