Presence

Graceful
Like an iris
Touched by the morning light
The subtle sense of the presence
Of God
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 29, 2009 at 11:06 AM
What an uplifting and inspirational poem. Blessings to you for sharing it. It certainly is a day brightener. Keep on writing! Karen
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March 29, 2009 at 8:30 AM
Very beautiful words, Jim! Love the way you sense God's presence in nature.
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March 29, 2009 at 8:26 AM
how beautiful writtten so full of truth, God bless you from diane
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March 29, 2009 at 8:22 AM
How lovely is this....serenity in words. !!
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March 29, 2009 at 7:14 AM
well written my friend! BRAVO :) ~ Arany
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March 29, 2009 at 7:13 AM
a beautiful poem!
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