Preperation Rapture

the great ah ha
what could be done better
a realisation of minds gone awry
why did i spend all that energy and time
and call killing time entertainment

It is coming your way
a realisation
the wars we fought
are not earthly
man's will to do good will eventually explain

preperation rapture
old thinking seen a new way
no shelter on this day
rebirth of souls
asking why we bothered to win a war to suffer
war was not born of earth

talking ourselves from going crazy
what did we learn from our own test
we can barely pass
hands of forefathers shape our heads

Gabrielles dance remembered
the proof of the underworld refusing to return home
preperation rapture
the calm of the storm
the angels giving chase
demon of war and so called chaos
betrayed

Take time to prepare yourselves for higher understanding
dispute my own freedom
getting carried away with my imagination
praying for clarity of the delusion
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 5/12/2010 8:56:00 AM
Nice. I bet you would like David Bowden (he's a poet not on here; I got to hear him perform and he was enragingly motivating.) Or you could check mine out; we both are trying to express something unseen. I hope you check your spelling though.
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