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spokes of bike reeling slow motion...mind rewinding ‘remember helmet’ straps it tight under his chin premonition frightens him 1/27/2018
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Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 1:02 AM
- An important advice for security, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 6:46 AM
For sure. Thank you, Anne-Lise xx Kim
Williams Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 10:15 PM
Wonderful imagery in a few words Kim. Yes warnings should always be heeded....Maria xx
Rodrigues Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 6:47 AM
Thank you, Maria!
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