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Premonition

Fog lifts from headstone 
        Reveals your name, birth and death
                  Time nears mend your ways

Copyright © Judy Konos | Year Posted 2015

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June 2, 2015 at 2:10 PM

Hello Judy, Your Senryu here does send a very clear message. We all only have so much time allotted to each of us in our "mortal coil." Enjoyed it!! Best Wishes, Gary

May 7, 2015 at 9:22 AM

At 85 I should heed your warning. Good stuff. Congrats on the selection. daver

May 4, 2015 at 5:08 AM

great to see this featured on the home page Judy xxx hugs jan xx

May 3, 2015 at 8:54 PM

Judy, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

May 3, 2015 at 9:24 PM

Thank you Skat......Love that name....S K A T

Poet Destroyer A

April 18, 2015 at 2:25 PM

Judy, Congratulations in John's "Let 'er Rip - Shoot from the Hip" contest!!! Luv LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

April 9, 2015 at 11:47 PM

oooh, what a premonition!! Congrats for your big win!

April 7, 2015 at 6:10 PM

so few words say so much Judy - sure grabbed my attention - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

April 7, 2015 at 7:24 AM

Concise, even.

April 7, 2015 at 7:23 AM

Sharp, concies, neat. Worthy verse. WELL DONE! VIV X

April 7, 2015 at 6:32 AM

Judy, this little beauty hit like a short left hook - quick, solid, and attention grabbing. Thanks for participating in the contest.

April 7, 2015 at 7:57 AM

Oh to be a poet like the great John Lawless.

March 22, 2015 at 12:33 AM

A fine warning, dear Judy. An exceptional haiku if I may say so. Thank you for sharing this today, Sunday. Kim:)

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