Prelude To Summer-Whipsy Winds

salty sea mist 
seized by winds...
dance ensues

craggy boulders...
chaperone
timeless watch
~*~
5/18/13
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Duncan Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 2:36 PM
love the haiku ;}
Sathasivam Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 11:38 PM
Excellent. Beautiful haiku. Enjoyed. Tfs
Horne Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 11:31 AM
lovely pair of haiku, my friend x
Tacito Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 11:51 PM
Very gripping Haikus. To choose between the two is quite difficult.
Sivey Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 7:32 PM
For some reason I'm in more favor of the second Haiku, it just has a rawness about it, a great characteristic appeal to it! I love this wonderful set of Haiku, Great Work!!
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