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A prelude to summer… spring’s glorious awakening Green meadows are alive, littered with hundreds of wild flowers Soft and wet, bright, green grass sway, unhindered by morning rain All awaiting warm sunshine to fill us with more glee! Out of woodsy habitats come young foxes and hares Their watchful eyes keen as they search for a meal Then hurriedly down a winding path, brave hares disappear And soon a startled Monarch butterfly flutters by! ~*~
5/29/14 Note: For Kelly's "...As A Butterfly Flutters By" Contest

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Date: 10/8/2017 9:20:00 AM
Such beautiful imagery depicting the beauty of summer..
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Date: 6/24/2014 7:10:00 PM
A sweet song that is... A Nature song with animals that decorate the scene.. BBBravoooooo!!!!!!!
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Date: 6/7/2014 5:21:00 PM
wow, what a beautiful descriptive piece - sure to be a big winner xx
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Date: 5/30/2014 3:32:00 AM
- A pleasure to read, Annalise ... give me a picture of love and joy of life. - Luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/29/2014 11:36:00 PM
Lol, ahh your poem is so fun, so alive with creation and activities. Awesome, Annalise. You sure seem ready for the summer :)
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Date: 5/29/2014 10:41:00 PM
this was simply adorable the way you fit that phrase into the story at the end with the brave hares and all. I really enjoyed this and I hope it does well in the contest. So good to see you here!!
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Date: 5/29/2014 9:13:00 PM
Great Imagery and flow. Very nice.
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Date: 5/29/2014 4:23:00 PM
Ahh!! Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Your entry is so descriptive and creative using the guidelines of the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 5/29/2014 4:05:00 PM
Stunning imagery hope it does really well in the contest, Hugs Jan x
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Date: 5/29/2014 3:49:00 PM
what a picture you have given us...lovely. Hope all is well. BG
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