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PREDICTABLE – OR NOT? “You’re so predictable,” she said, As I gave her the bouquet. “Did you think a bunch of roses Would make everything okay? You’ll have to do much better, If you want me to forgive And for us to be together For as long as we both shall live.” I wasn’t quite so predictable With what I told her next. “I just thought this was kinder Than dumping you by text”. 8th December 2019 Predictable contest Sponsor - Nina Parmenter

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Date: 12/10/2019 2:41:00 PM
congrats on your winning poem Bryn
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Date: 12/10/2019 2:38:00 PM
Bam! love this!
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Date: 12/10/2019 11:51:00 AM
Enjoyed the unpredictable ending to this poem. "Oh dear" is right! Congratulations.
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Date: 12/8/2019 5:13:00 PM
Fun poem, Bryn. Love your poem.
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Date: 12/8/2019 6:13:00 AM
oh dear... guess she was not expecting that..
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