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Predictable

During my lifetime I go with the flow Rather predictable and slow, Upon my death I wish no light to cast, Best unpredictable and fast. December 01. 2019

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Date: 12/13/2019 8:52:00 AM
Clever one Margarita! I admire people who can make these witty short poems. May you have a relaxed life and a swift exit. (Sounds good to me.) Congratulations on placing in my contest!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/13/2019 9:22:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/10/2019 2:41:00 PM
congrats on your winning poem Margarita
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/13/2019 9:22:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 12/10/2019 11:55:00 AM
Enjoyed your quatrain. Very relatable. Congratulations!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/10/2019 12:54:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/4/2019 12:06:00 PM
My life is much the same, very predictable, though the older I get it seems to go by much faster. Best of luck in the contest, Margarita. John
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/13/2019 9:23:00 PM
Thank you!