J.Koladi Samson Poet Light Verse

Predetor

High above clouds
You flew
Radar focusing beneath
In search of prey.

Image fell on screen
One walking in  haste
His head bowed down
Wondering at
Mismatching arithmetic
At home, office
Breaking his back
To meet ends both
Nebulous mind.

Flare in your eyes
Like a diving bird
Impertinent crash landing
Sharp claws clung
An ascension with prey
Into unreachable heights
Vanishing into thin blue.

A quill is shed
Life drops dead.

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 22, 2012 at 9:50 AM Congratulations on your very well deserved poetry being featured this week J. Love, Carol

Funom Makama June 6, 2012 at 5:23 AM This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work. J.Koladi Samson June 18, 2012 at 2:22 AM Thank you for your evaluation. I shall go through your poems. I am pasting one more poem. Hope you will go through it. Please try to analyse it.

Joseph May June 5, 2012 at 6:55 PM I wrote one by the same title Koladi....nicely done..Joseph

Carol Sunshine Brown June 5, 2012 at 11:54 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you J. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol J.Koladi Samson June 18, 2012 at 2:23 AM Thank you for nice words. I need your wishes and blessings for the Sun to shine on me. Samson