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Predetor

High above clouds You flew Radar focusing beneath In search of prey. Image fell on screen One walking in haste His head bowed down Wondering at Mismatching arithmetic At home, office Breaking his back To meet ends both Nebulous mind. Flare in your eyes Like a diving bird Impertinent crash landing Sharp claws clung An ascension with prey Into unreachable heights Vanishing into thin blue. A quill is shed Life drops dead.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/22/2012 9:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your very well deserved poetry being featured this week J. Love, Carol

Funom Makama

Date: 6/6/2012 5:23:00 AM

This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.

J.Koladi Samson
Date: 6/18/2012 2:22:00 AM

Thank you for your evaluation. I shall go through your poems. I am pasting one more poem. Hope you will go through it. Please try to analyse it.

Joseph May

Date: 6/5/2012 6:55:00 PM

I wrote one by the same title Koladi....nicely done..Joseph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/5/2012 11:54:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you J. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

J.Koladi Samson
Date: 6/18/2012 2:23:00 AM

Thank you for nice words. I need your wishes and blessings for the Sun to shine on me. Samson