Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Predestined - Divine

I spoke her thoughts -- she spoke mine
Our meeting sure predestined, Divine ... 
Nestling her hand in mine, rainbows arched on high
  ~ in the Heaven of our hearts, as angels sighed  

In synchrony the magic flowed, an endless carousel
moments and ideas shared, visions coursed through us pell-mell
  ~ Our hearts launched skyward, as in deepest love we fell ...  



                     June 22, 2018

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Eve Roper June 27, 2018 at 8:06 PM Gershon, congratulations on your win. Nicely done and very beautifully articulated . Hugs Eve ~`* Gershon Wolf June 27, 2018 at 9:08 PM Thank you for your generous praise, Eve. Much appreciated! Warmest wishes, Gershon

Sylvia Coulstock June 26, 2018 at 5:50 PM I fell in love with this Gershon,really lovely.Congrats also on your win, I’m not surprised. Gershon Wolf June 26, 2018 at 9:58 PM Sigh! No one has ever fallen in love with anything I've written before...I'm honored and humbled. Thank you so much, Sylvia. You've made my day! Warmest wishes, Gershon

Susan Gentry June 25, 2018 at 11:47 PM Back to congratulate you on this win! Such a love story! Well done. :) Gershon Wolf June 26, 2018 at 10:00 PM ---And it was really true too! Made it a bit easier to write. Thank you again, Susan, as always, for your encouragement! ~ Gershon

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 25, 2018 at 9:47 AM Back with congratulations xo Gershon Wolf June 25, 2018 at 5:16 PM Appreciated, Maureen. :) gw

Silent One June 25, 2018 at 6:40 AM Now that is romance... nice romantic lines Gershon.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Gershon Wolf June 25, 2018 at 5:15 PM Thank you, and thank you for this sponsoring this Muse-stretching contest! ~ Gershon

Susan Ashley June 24, 2018 at 10:39 PM Your romantic pen takes me to glorious heights beyond heaven, Gershon. Some things are just beautifully meant to be..'Nestling her hand in mine, rainbows arched on high ~ in the Heaven of our hearts, as angels sighed' - ah such poetic bliss :) A star dusted love story! Warmest wishes my wonderful friend. ~Susan Gershon Wolf June 25, 2018 at 5:15 PM Beyond heaven, Susan S-T-N? Hmmm. That should be quite the 'scoop,' although not surprising considering your angelic quill, character, and mien... Hope you took some photos and plan to cash in. (btw: I'll take 10% as a 'finder's fee.') ... ~ Silly in Chicago

Susan Gentry June 23, 2018 at 4:10 PM Beautiful! I think we have a winner... beyond that perfect rhyme, romantic love story :) Gershon Wolf June 23, 2018 at 11:07 PM Thank you so much for your encouraging words, Susan. Best always, Gershon

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 23, 2018 at 9:25 AM Ooh la la. You haven't pulled out your romantic sword in a while, I must warn the women, we're not safe ;p Fabulous ink my friend! xomo Gershon Wolf June 23, 2018 at 11:06 PM Well, better safe than sorry, I guess! … Thank you for encouraging me, Maureen, as you always do. Best always, gw (soup mail).

Robertina B. June 22, 2018 at 6:06 PM "Such a glorious rhyme, my dear friend.. I feel like I'm soaring high in the heavens.. This rhyme is a gem, dear friend.. Many blessings!" Gershon Wolf June 23, 2018 at 11:05 PM Thank you for your generous assessment, Robertina. I am always happy to read your kind words. Best wishes, Gershon

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2018 at 6:05 PM Beautiful, Gershon. Gershon Wolf June 23, 2018 at 11:04 PM Thank you so much, Andrea. And thanks also for putting that comma between "beautiful" and "Gershon!" :) gw