Precipice

Drunken pills and stumble trouble
caught beneath a lifeless rubble
he assigned some roles to play
burrow deep now, all the way
fill her needs and smile bright
play your part, it is your plight

After a half a century
The buried child wants to see
still embryonic, primitive skill
denial listless, secrets spill
he knows now he was never loved
when he spoke, quickly gloved
and suddenly he needs and feels
he rebirths, stretches
-but then he reels

He has no knowledge of his likes
as he waits, the doubt, it strikes
it shoves the boy right off his core
it shoves his real self out the door

Agony splits role and boy
living chaos without joy
when he ponders go ahead
he also weighs if  kinder dead
he’d like to give you tied up bow
but that’s not he, that is his role
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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La France Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 1:08 PM
Timothy, wonderful writing, you have a way with words that I really like, in my journey here thus far, I have found this is a place where we can reveal our deepest thoughts and life experiences and our fellow poets will understand, 7 ~
Barry Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 4:16 PM
Yes, Broken , though really new to expression, it's an amazing form and forum.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 8:52 AM
Within each there is the part that is hidden that crys out to be known. Through poetry it can be revealed and released. Another strong piece.
Barry Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Yes, Richard Im riding those long lost pieces here also. Thanks as always for your support.
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March 25, 2016 at 11:52 PM
Timothy, this is a deep write, to fall like this and have no knowledge... you did well. LINDA
Barry Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Thanks for your thoughtful comments Linda.
Barry Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 4:17 PM
So much less sad when shared here and especially when I get a respected comment. Can't express my thanks Silent One. Thanks.
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