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Precious Time

When you find yourself going upstream Life may feel heavy as it seems Take a breath for just a moment Capture the precious time well spent Move with ease like a butterfly Treat yourself well, reach for the sky Answers don’t always come fast Let yourself be free at last The birds are singing to you The sun is shining straight through With warmth into your soul inside Where you will reach places to confide Heidi Sands 1/15/18

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Akkina Downing

Date: 1/21/2018 9:57:00 PM

Such a great positive message, Miss Heidi. So beautiful I love it! Hugs and smiles :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/22/2018 2:34:00 AM

Hi Akkina. Thank you for coming by and I am happy you like it :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/16/2018 2:51:00 PM

very liberating, heidi...beautifully done.. huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2018 2:58:00 PM

Thank you Nette :) I appreciate your comment.

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/16/2018 12:32:00 PM

Yes, an important reminder and something that I forget BUT I always get back on board, Lovely poem Heidi as always, Happy Tuesday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2018 1:01:00 PM

Happy to hear you always get back on board Mike. Thank you for your kind comment :) Happy Tuesday !

Barry Stebbings

Date: 1/16/2018 10:14:00 AM

Very true and positive poem, Heidi. We often miss so much of the beauty in this world. // Barry

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2018 1:01:00 PM

Thank you Barry :)

Silent One

Date: 1/16/2018 9:22:00 AM

A lovely poem of hope.. Always look at the brighter side, there is so much beauty in this world..

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2018 1:00:00 PM

Thank you Silent One :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/15/2018 8:39:00 PM

Beautifully soothing and soul stirring. I needed to read this excellent poem tonight. Thank you Heidi :) ~Susan

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2018 7:28:00 AM

Thank you Susan. I am happy to hear you like it and you are welcome :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/15/2018 5:04:00 PM

Uplifting words, beautiful images, a message of comfort..well written, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2018 5:56:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your positive feedback :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/15/2018 3:03:00 PM

such beautiful calming imagery, such an uplifting positive poem Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2018 3:06:00 PM

Thank you Jan :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/15/2018 2:21:00 PM

Very well thought poem with hopeful messages and great rhymes dear, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2018 2:27:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/15/2018 2:18:00 PM

True...answers don’t always come fast. Love the hope in the final verse! Nice, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2018 2:27:00 PM

Thank you Kim :) I am happy you like it

Joseph May

Date: 1/15/2018 1:23:00 PM

A wonderful and positive message Heidi..Nicely penned...

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2018 1:38:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/15/2018 1:16:00 PM

A very spiritual one...soothing and inspiring...Nice poem...All the best Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2018 1:38:00 PM

Thank you Arturo :)