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Precious Time

Just when you think you can’t go on much longer
With a whirlwind of issues plaguing your mind,
Take a step, just a step with all you have left.
Knowing, only a step is moving you forward.
The sights wait for you to look and see.
The fresh air waits for you to breathe.
You may think it isn’t enough with how you feel.
But a step is a step and a sight is a sight.
With each and every piece of beauty captured,
You will create your own scenery in your mind
To surround you with all that you have to endure.
One day your life will reflect all of the beauty.
One day, it will not be as it is right now because
You let yourself move forward in precious time.

Heidi Sands
3/5/17

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Charmaine Chircop Date: 3/9/2017 2:20:00 PM Such a beauty this is ..filled with a positive vibe. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/9/2017 2:25:00 PM Thank you Charmaine :)

Chris Green Date: 3/6/2017 2:26:00 PM Such a positive and encouraging message is found in your words my dear friend, but, that is what I always seem to find with you. Beautiful expressed Heidi. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/6/2017 2:35:00 PM Thank you Chris. I appreciate your visit and kindness :)

Elizabeth Kinch Date: 3/6/2017 2:09:00 PM This is beautiful write reminding us all to keep moving forward. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/6/2017 2:23:00 PM Hi Elizabeth. Thank you. I do hope it can reach anyone having a difficult time. :)

Paul Callus Date: 3/6/2017 11:19:00 AM This is meaningful, inspiring and it makes a lot of sense, Heidi. Each journey starts with the first step, and continues with others that follow. Every moment in time is valuable. ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/6/2017 11:22:00 AM Thank you Paul. I appreciate your visit and comment :)

Darren White Date: 3/6/2017 8:54:00 AM Thank you Heidi, this is so uplifting:) I will take your advice. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/6/2017 9:00:00 AM Hi Darren. I am happy you find this to be uplifting :) Thank you.

Tom Wright Date: 3/6/2017 8:13:00 AM Heidi, This poem fits me in so many ways. after recent open heart surgery i could do nothing on my own. Each day i was told it would come back with time. each step and each day was an improvement. now i'm home and each day find myself moving forward in precious time. Tom Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/6/2017 9:00:00 AM Hi Tom. Thanks for your visit and I am happy to hear you can relate to this and you are doing much better moving forward :)

Charlie Smith Date: 3/5/2017 9:23:00 PM Just be careful if you live in a high rise. Loved it Heidi... Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/6/2017 3:25:00 AM True Charlie! Thank you.

Edward Mccall Date: 3/5/2017 5:29:00 PM What a powerful message Heidi a very inspirational write nicely done another fav. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/5/2017 5:31:00 PM Thanks so much Edward :) :)